Warrior's Wings

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Chapter 3 Page 14

20th Aug 2019, 8:33 PM in Chapter 3: Chi Power I
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Chapter 3 Page 14
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Dera Nuel 20th Aug 2019, 8:33 PM edit delete
Dera Nuel
Phew!! The last couple of pages have been especially tough for me. When I first wrote this chapter, the Sinoras fought the invading weilders. But sadly I had to change that because of so many factors I didn't consider before drafting that jolly ho ending.
So in this final page it's just Old Man Eze and a bunch of blood thirsty weilders who are both disgusted at the scene before them and annoyed at the cowardice of the Sinora clan. That should keep you wondering xD.
The next chapter will be filled with LOTS OF ACTION!! I'm going to work hard on that and start releasing once I've gotten a couple of pages ready.
Thanks for reading!! You guys are the best!!

Comments:

MK_Wizard 20th Aug 2019, 8:40 PM edit delete reply
MK_Wizard
What a way to end.
Dera Nuel 21st Aug 2019, 6:35 PM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Yeah. The cliffhanger way xD. It's safe to say that both parties aren't having very good days.
Sovember 21st Aug 2019, 12:13 AM edit delete reply
Sovember
Awesome final page and chapter man!! The last panel is so detailed. I'm so hyped for Chi Power too, what a poignant and effective cliff hanger.

Now I wonder where this will go, if they'll assume Dike is dead too hmm!
Dera Nuel 21st Aug 2019, 6:39 PM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Thanks again man.
Nah. Dike isn't going to leave Ajohia or Obodo easily. In the next chapter you'll see just how seriously these guys take their manhunts.
snuffysam 21st Aug 2019, 7:59 PM edit delete reply
snuffysam
Sax: "I am! Thank you for asking!"
Dera Nuel 23rd Aug 2019, 11:10 AM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Muhahahahhahhahha!!! That's really funny. Sax might actually be thinking that.
korturna23 23rd Aug 2019, 5:58 AM edit delete reply
korturna23
Caught up to this ^^ . Its so sad what happened to the villagers. But at least Dike is safe ^3^
Dera Nuel 23rd Aug 2019, 11:14 AM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Thanks for taking the time to read through.
Yes. It would seem Dike is safe for now. But like I told Sovember, we'll see just how seriously the weilders take their manhunts in the next chapter. Lol... I'm really eager to show you guys.
Darksh1ne 23rd Aug 2019, 3:35 PM edit delete reply
Darksh1ne
Feels bad that they actually decided to go with that plan but... what can you do. Great pages, Dera!
Dera Nuel 30th Aug 2019, 9:14 AM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
I'm glad you understand. Thanks a lot!!
AmeliaP 29th Aug 2019, 5:19 AM edit delete reply
AmeliaP
I agreed with everyone here. Awesome narrative technique! It seems it comes natural to you.
Dera Nuel 30th Aug 2019, 9:17 AM edit delete reply
Dera Nuel
Thanks!! I'm really happy you enjoy my storytelling. More than anything I want my readers to like the stories I tell.
dubiz senju 22nd Sep 2019, 1:19 PM edit delete reply
dubiz senju
Great way to end the chapter! I wonder if eze sinora is going to fight sax and his wielders or just pop himself like his fellow clansmen!I'm rooting for a fight though